Try to develop your answers to some of the evaluation questions to include more detail.
In Question 1 you need to consider what are the conventions of music magazines and then identify the conventions you used - ideally by labelling pages from existing and your music magazine.
In the questions about your target audience try to include more detail about who your target audience are and how you have appealed to them with reference to specific examples.
Look again at your blog format, it is a little difficult to navigate - the moderator needs to be able to find the different parts of your coursework easily.
Try to develop your answers to some of the evaluation questions to include more detail.
ReplyDeleteIn Question 1 you need to consider what are the conventions of music magazines and then identify the conventions you used - ideally by labelling pages from existing and your music magazine.
In the questions about your target audience try to include more detail about who your target audience are and how you have appealed to them with reference to specific examples.
Look again at your blog format, it is a little difficult to navigate - the moderator needs to be able to find the different parts of your coursework easily.